Hi bloggers,
Here is what I think a diary might look like if I were a shark.
What I found challenging was trying to think of some ideas to write about but what I loved about doing this task was making up all the funny parts of the diary and writing about it.
I hope you like it!
Diary of a shark
WEDNESDAY
Dear Diary, today I went to Shark School. Some of my friends are called Mako, Goblin, Hammer head, Tiger and Great White. Miss Shark was teaching the whole entire class how to hunt our food and not let our prey go. It was AWESOME!
THURSDAY
Dear Diary, today when we were in class Whale Shark farted when he was reading his poem. It was SO loud, I think it caused a tsunami! After shark school was my birthday party. All of my friends showed up. Mako was just going crazy with the rock n roll sharks and my house was getting smashed! Even my mum's favourite picture of me and her got thrown out the window because of Tiger. That party was CRAZY! Happy birthday to me.
FRIDAY
Dear Diary, I’m happy because it’s almost the end of the week. Mum and Dad say that when it is the end of the week and I have finished all my homework, I can play in the sunken pirate ship tomorrow. I can't wait! Also, I lost 30 baby teeth today! I can’t wait for my razor sharp grown up teeth to grow. I hope the shark tooth fairy comes to visit me tonight.
SATURDAY
Dear Diary, me and my friends went to the sunken pirate ship today and you won’t believe what we found. Me and my friends were swimming around looking for treasure when we suddenly found a floating dead whale! Free meal! We saved some whale for Mum and Dad. They were so surprised and happy and they gobbled it all up straight away.
Great diary Shark - Axel....a very entertaining read, especially the whale shark farting!! Ha!Ha!ha!
ReplyDeleteWell done Axel.
Ka pai Axel. I'm loving your writing on your blog. this sunken pirate ship sounds like a fun place to explore. Maybe you could write a story or make an animation about how the pirate ship ended up there? I'm also wondering how sharks would take photos? And wouldn't they get soggy in the ocean?
ReplyDeleteLOL! Axel, this is another fantastic piece of writing! I loved it! It was an incredibly entertaining and funny piece to read! As the reader I can see that you thought about what would be humorous but also what would make sense for a shark. You have been really creative with this piece of writing. I like Phil's suggestion for creating an animation, perhaps you could have a go at creating one using google slides?
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