The Three Smart Wheke
Once upon a time, three smart wheke lived together in a large sparkling rockpool by the ocean. The rockpool used to be filled with lots of small ika, small papaka, pipi and tuangi but the three wheke ate through all their yummy kaimoana! The three wheke were very hungry and looked over at the moana and saw that there were plenty of kaimoana for them to eat. All they had to do was cross over some rough, bumpy rocks and climb into the moana.
Little Wheke agreed to go first. He started squiggling over the rocks with his tiny tentacles when all of a sudden a huge hungry karoro flew over and stopped Little Wheke in his tracks. “HEY YOU! WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU’RE GOING? COME HERE SO I CAN EAT YOU!” squawked the hungry karoro. Little Wheke was so frightened and said, “Please don’t eat me! I’m too little to eat. My brother is coming soon and he is much bigger than me.”
The karoro stopped and thought for a moment. “You’re too small for a snack. You can go ahead and I will wait for your brother”, said the karoro. The Little Wheke squiggled over the bumpy rocks and made it into the moana.
A little while later, it was Middle Wheke’s turn to squiggle over the bumpy rocks. All of a sudden, the hungry karoro swooped down again and squawked, “HEY YOU! WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU’RE GOING? COME HERE SO I CAN EAT YOU!”Middle Wheke was afraid and said, “Please don’t eat me! I’m too little to eat. My brother is coming soon and he is much bigger than me.” The karoro stopped and thought again. “You’re too small for a snack. You can go ahead and I will wait for your brother”, said the karoro. The Middle Wheke squiggled over the bumpy rocks and made it into the moana.
Finally it was Big Wheke’s turn to cross the bumpy rocks. With his huge, long, sloppy and slimy tentacles, Big Wheke started to pull himself across the bumpy rocks. The hungry karoro saw Big Wheke from above and felt super excited because now he could finally eat his yummy meal. Big Wheke saw the karoro flying in the air. The karoro circled the rockpool and was ready to swoop, but when he looked down again, Big Wheke was nowhere to be seen. The karoro was so confused and flew down onto the rocks to look for him. He searched and searched, but couldn’t find Big Wheke anywhere. That’s because Big Wheke had a special trick. He could camouflage himself to look like the bumpy rocks.
The karoro searched for a long time until he finally gave up and flew away. Big Wheke happily crawled over the bumpy rocks and slipped into the moana and joined his brothers. The three smart wheke’s lived happily ever after in the moana where there was lots of kaimoana for them to eat.
Kia ora Axel. I was hooked into your blog post because I happened to learn the kupu for octopus (wheke) this week (also ururoa is shark). Great writing Axel, you've got some interesting vocabulary in English and Te Reo Māori. I think I know the story but I won't give it away yet. Where did you find your image? Did you use the explore tool?
ReplyDeleteHi Phil thank you for blog commenting on my blog sorry but I didnet get the picture from the tools I actually got it from google and how have you been doing then what was the real story.
DeleteThanks for the reply Axel. Is it the 3 Billy Goats Gruff? Remember if you use explore it will only show you images which are free to use which is a good Cybersmart choice.
DeleteYes it is The 3 Billy Goats Gruff! :)
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Axel....you are a great story teller, I really enjoyed reading your blog.
ReplyDeleteYour use a capital letters helps to add to the drama of the tale and the image is excellent.
Did you have any help proof reading your work??
Well done Axel.
Hi Miss P thanks for your comment. Yes i did have help from my mum. She has been helping me a lot in lockdown with my homework especially writing because it's hard for me.
DeleteKia ora Axel. Great story! I love the plot twist with the camouflage. You've used repetition very effectively to build up a clear picture in the reader's mind. I'd really like to include your story in our first newsletter back. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Ms C
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Campbell, i told my mum that you want to put it in the newsletter and she was really happy.
Deletegood story axel
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